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Andrei ([personal profile] illizarov) wrote in [personal profile] necessarian 2015-08-24 02:59 pm (UTC)

ahhh this is so fluffy and warm!
i like how this piece of work uses ennoshita's POV! the whole description (especially the opening: "Sunrise is a grey light in the distance"), thought process ("clinging to the last bit of his self-control" etc), and the way he sees futakuchi (i can't do examples; affection is spilling from my laptop) are all so in character. in other words, cinematic, visual, and also as if ennoshita'd like to capture the moment between himself and futakuchi with scenes. the best part is how futakuchi goes along with it like they're already married.
also i'm weak in the knees bc of the proposal. nobody's immune to that.

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